To Autumn - John Keats

2013/12/04

SEASON of mists and mellow fruitfulness,
        Close bosom-friend of the maturing sun;
    Conspiring with him how to load and bless
        With fruit the vines that round the thatch-eves run;
    To bend with apples the moss’d cottage-trees,
        And fill all fruit with ripeness to the core;
            To swell the gourd, and plump the hazel shells
    With a sweet kernel; to set budding more,
        And still more, later flowers for the bees,
        Until they think warm days will never cease,
            For Summer has o’er-brimm’d their clammy cells.

                                            
Who hath not seen thee oft amid thy store? 
        Sometimes whoever seeks abroad may find
    Thee sitting careless on a granary floor,
        Thy hair soft-lifted by the winnowing wind;
    Or on a half-reap’d furrow sound asleep,
        Drows’d with the fume of poppies, while thy hook
            Spares the next swath and all its twined flowers:
    And sometimes like a gleaner thou dost keep
        Steady thy laden head across a brook;
        Or by a cyder-press, with patient look,
            Thou watchest the last oozings hours by hours.

                                            
    Where are the songs of Spring? Ay, where are they?
        Think not of them, thou hast thy music too,—
    While barred clouds bloom the soft-dying day,
        And touch the stubble plains with rosy hue;
    Then in a wailful choir the small gnats mourn
        Among the river sallows, borne aloft
            Or sinking as the light wind lives or dies;
    And full-grown lambs loud bleat from hilly bourn;
        Hedge-crickets sing; and now with treble soft
        The red-breast whistles from a garden-croft;
           And gathering swallows twitter in the skies.




MEANING OF DIFFICULT WORDS
1.      O’er-brimm’d – overflow
2.      Drows’d – full
3.      Poppies – opium(drugs)
4.      Swath – The width of a cut made by a sicke. Eg: tall grass
5.      Gleaner – Someone who picks the harvested fruits
6.      Cider - an alcoholic drink made from the fermented juice of apples
7.      Gnats – small insects
8.      Sallows – a willow tree/to turn yellow
9.      Bourn – a boundary/a small hill
10.  Treble-soft – the pitch
11.  Red-breast – a bird that sings
12.  Garden-croft – a small patch of land adjacent to the house. Used as a kitchen garden/ herb garden


POETIC/LITERARY DEVICES
1.       Images
    • Budding flowers
    • Ripe fruit
    • “To bend with apples the moss’d cottage-trees.” This imagery gives about the season such that apples are picked in the fall and you get a mental picture of a place during the season. In the first stanza, there are pretty mental images of fall, but by the final stanza, you have images of noisiness and leading into the next season, which represents the progression of death, from good to bad.
2.      Metaphors
o   “Hedge-crickets sing; and now with treble soft”- to compare the sounds made in autumn to music. Keats compares the noises made by hedge-crickets to musical notes.

3.      Personification
o   Used in the second stanza of “To Autumn”. Autumn is brought to life as a person by giving the season human characteristics and even physical features.
o   “And touch the stubble-plains with rosy hue”. Normally, a rosy hue would refer to a person being cheerful and happy and stubble would signify a male’s facial hair. Here, they personify clouds in order to symbolize how death can destroy all former happiness.

4.      Rhetorical question
o   “Where are the songs of spring? Ay, where are they? This is a simple question merely asking when are there going to be more births and less deaths. Spring represents a new beginning and birth. At this season, death opens the question of “where did my life go?”
5.      Diction
o   Many of the words used by Keats in this poem have connections to fall and the harvest season. A granary is a place to store grain after being husked. A gourd is the hard shell of fruits, normally picked during the harvest season. Cyder-press is also used which is a crusher used to make cider. By using this, Keats has the characteristics of fall and what people normally do during the season

6.      Similes
o   “And sometimes like a gleaner thou dost keep” (19)

7.      Repetition
o   “[…]to set budding more/ And still more” (8)



STANZA BY STANZA ANALYSIS
STANZA 1: The speaker addresses autumn as if it were a person. He notes the autumn and the sun are like best friends plotting how to make fruit grow and how to ripen crops before the harvest. The ripening will lead to the dropping of seed which sets the stage for spring flowers and the whole process starting over again. He tells about the bees that think summer can last forever as they buzz around the flower.

STANZA 2: Describes the period after the harvest, when autumn just hangs out around the granary where harvested grains are kept. Most of the hard work has already been done, and autumn can just take a nap in the fields, walk across books or watch the making of cider.

STANZA 3: Autumn sound with those of spring. The sounds that are presented are not only those of autumn but essentially the gentle sounds of the evening. As the night approaches, within the final moments of the song, death is slowly approaching alongside of the end of the year. The last stanza reminds reader that the seasons are a cycle, widening the scope of this stanza from a single season to life in general.


CRITICAL APPRECIATION
In ‘To Autumn’, a super-facial reading would suggest that John Keats writes about a typical day of this season, describing all kinds of colorful and detailed images. The author makes an intense description of autumn at least at first sight. Although John Keats’s first impression was simply describing the main characteristics of autumn and the human and animal activities related to it, a deeper reading could suggest that he talks about the process of life. Autumn symbolizes maturity in human and animal lives. Some instances of this are the ‘full-grown lambs’, the sorrow of the gnats, the wind that lives and dies, and the day that is dying and getting dark. As all we know, the next season is winter, a part of the year that represents aging and death, in other words, the end of life. However, in my opinion, death does not have a negative connotation because Keats enjoys and accepts ‘autumn’ or maturity as part of life, though winter is coming.


READING MATERIAL
In both its form and descriptive surface, “To Autumn” is one of the simplest of Keats’s odes. There is nothing confusing or complex in Keats’s paean to the season of autumn, with its fruitfulness, its flowers, and the song of its swallows gathering for migration. The extraordinary achievement of this poem lies in its ability to suggest, explore, and develop a rich abundance of themes without ever ruffling its calm, gentle, and lovely description of autumn. Where “Ode on Melancholy” presents itself as a strenuous heroic quest, “To Autumn” is concerned with the much quieter activity of daily observation and appreciation. In this quietude, the gathered themes of the preceding odes find their fullest and most beautiful expression.

“To Autumn” takes up where the other odes leave off. Like the others, it shows Keats’s speaker paying homage to a particular goddess—in this case, the deified season of Autumn. The selection of this season implicitly takes up the other odes’ themes of temporality, mortality, and change: Autumn in Keats’s ode is a time of warmth and plenty, but it is perched on the brink of winter’s desolation, as the bees enjoy “later flowers,” the harvest is gathered from the fields, the lambs of spring are now “full grown,” and, in the final line of the poem, the swallows gather for their winter migration. The understated sense of inevitable loss in that final line makes it one of the most moving moments in all of poetry; it can be read as a simple, uncomplaining summation of the entire human condition.

Despite the coming chill of winter, the late warmth of autumn provides Keats’s speaker with ample beauty to celebrate: the cottage and its surroundings in the first stanza, the agrarian haunts of the goddess in the second, and the locales of natural creatures in the third. Keats’s speaker is able to experience these beauties in a sincere and meaningful way because of the lessons he has learned in the previous odes: He is no longer indolent, no longer committed to the isolated imagination (as in “Psyche”), no longer attempting to escape the pain of the world through ecstatic rapture (as in “Nightingale”), no longer frustrated by the attempt to eternalize mortal beauty or subject eternal beauty to time (as in “Urn”), and no longer able to frame the connection of pleasure and the sorrow of loss only as an imaginary heroic quest (as in “Melancholy”).

In “To Autumn,” the speaker’s experience of beauty refers back to earlier odes (the swallows recall the nightingale; the fruit recalls joy’s grape; the goddess drowsing among the poppies recalls Psyche and Cupid lying in the grass), but it also recalls a wealth of earlier poems. Most importantly, the image of Autumn winnowing and harvesting (in a sequence of odes often explicitly about creativity) recalls an earlier Keats poem in which the activity of harvesting is an explicit metaphor for artistic creation. In his sonnet “When I have fears that I may cease to be,” Keats makes this connection directly:

When I have fears that I may cease to be
Before my pen has glean’d my teeming brain,
Before high-piled books, in charactry,
Hold like rich garners the full ripen’d grain...

In this poem, the act of creation is pictured as a kind of self-harvesting; the pen harvests the fields of the brain, and books are filled with the resulting “grain.” In “To Autumn,” the metaphor is developed further; the sense of coming loss that permeates the poem confronts the sorrow underlying the season’s creativity. When Autumn’s harvest is over, the fields will be bare, the swaths with their “twined flowers” cut down, the cider-press dry, the skies empty. But the connection of this harvesting to the seasonal cycle softens the edge of the tragedy. In time, spring will come again, the fields will grow again, and the birdsong will return. As the speaker knew in “Melancholy,” abundance and loss, joy and sorrow, song and silence are as intimately connected as the twined flowers in the fields. What makes “To Autumn” beautiful is that it brings an engagement with that connection out of the realm of mythology and fantasy and into the everyday world. The development the speaker so strongly resisted in “Indolence” is at last complete: He has learned that an acceptance of mortality is not destructive to an appreciation of beauty and has gleaned wisdom by accepting the passage of time.



BIBLIOGRAPHY

The Solitary Reaper - William Wordsworth

2013/12/01

Behold her, single in the field,
Yon solitary Highland Lass!
Reaping and singing by herself;
Stop here, or gently pass!
Alone she cuts and binds the grain,
And sings a melancholy strain;
O listen! for the Vale profound
Is overflowing with the sound.

No Nightingale did ever chaunt
More welcome notes to weary bands
Of travellers in some shady haunt,
Among Arabian sands:
A voice so thrilling ne'er was heard
In spring-time from the Cuckoo-bird,
Breaking the silence of the seas
Among the farthest Hebrides.

Will no one tell me what she sings?--
Perhaps the plaintive numbers flow
For old, unhappy, far-off things,
And battles long ago:
Or is it some more humble lay,
Familiar matter of to-day?
Some natural sorrow, loss, or pain,
That has been, and may be again?

Whate'er the theme, the Maiden sang
As if her song could have no ending;
I saw her singing at her work,
And o'er the sickle bending;--
I listened, motionless and still;
And, as I mounted up the hill,
The music in my heart I bore,
Long after it was heard no more


MEANING OF DIFFICULT WORDS
1.      Binds - to fasten or secure with a band or bond.
2.      Melancholy- a gloomy state of mind, especially when habitual or prolonged; 
depression, sober thoughtfulness
3.      Profound- penetrating or entering deeply into subjects of thought or knowledge; 
having deep insight or understanding: a profound thinker.
4.   Hebrides- a group of islands (Inner Hebrides and  Outer Hebrides) belonging to Scotland.
5.      Plaintive number- the melancholic sad songs which flow from the reapers heart one after another



POETIC/LITERARY DEVICES
1.      Hyperbole
o   Breaking the silence of the seas among the farthest Hebrides- The voice of the girl was so sweet that it broke the silence of the seas and of the far of islands on north-western coast of Scotland. These islands are never disturbed by any storm but the voice of the girl had intruded the silence of these group of  islands   
o   O listen! For the Vale profound is overflowing with the sound – he says that the whole deep valley is echoing with her sweet song

2.       Metaphors
o   In the spring time from the Cuckoo-bird – used as a comparison to the maiden’s voice. The poet says that such a sweet voice was never heard from the cuckoo even in the Spring season
o   The voice of a ‘nightingale’- Nightingale is considered as a sweet-voice bird. The poet says no nightingale has so far sung as melodious a song as the girl sings

3.      Rhetorical questions
o   Will no one tell me what she sings?
o   That has may been, and may be again?

4.      Imagery
o   O listen! For the Vale profound is overflowing with the sound




STANZA BY STANZA ANALYSIS
FIRST STANZA: The poet, William Wordsworth, introduces us to the subject of the poem, the solitary reaper. She is standing alone in the field, reaping and singing. She sings a morose, gloomy song while she cuts and binds the sheaves of grain. It seems to the poet as if the surrounding valley is brimming over with the song of the reaper.

SECOND STANZA: According to the poet, the reaper’s song surpassed, in its beauty, the sweet notes of the nightingale that welcomed tired groups of travellers into an oasis in an Arabian desert.
The voice of the harvester was more breath taking than that of the cuckoo singing in spring in the Hebrides islands.

THIRD STANZA: The poet, however, does not understand the words of the reaper's song. He starts to speculate on the subject of the song. He thinks that perhaps it is about an ancient incident which occurred in a distant land or a battle which may have taken place years ago.
He further wonders, whether the song has something to do with the day to day life of the solitary reaper. He thinks that she might be singing about grief and sadness which has occurred and might return.

FOURTH STANZA: To the poet, it seemed that the song of the solitary reaper would not end. She sang as she worked, bending over her sickle. For a long time the poet listened to the song, enchanted and transfixed. As he moved up the hill, he continued to carry the music in his heart even after he could no longer hear it.



CRITICAL APPRECIATION
The Solitary Reaper is a delightful lyric by William Wordsworth. Wordsworth-known as a great lover and preacher of nature- had impresses us by the imaginative and philosophical quality of his thoughts. This poem talks about a man’s experience when he travelled to a field in Scotland and saw a lady. He was mesmerised by the song she sang. The song captured his attention even though he doesn’t understand what she was singing. He says that the sound is more welcome than any chant of the nightingale to weary travellers in the desert, and that the cuckoo-bird in spring never sang with a voice so thrilling. The poet could not make out the theme of the song. He, however, thinks it is about some unhappy incident of the past or a battle fought long ago or about some misfortunes of our daily life like loss, pain or death. Such a simple incident strikes the reader (this poem is published 2 years after the encounter)




READING MATERIAL
The poem 'The Solitary Reaper' was written by William Wordsworth in the Romantic Era. Most of William Wordsworth poems are filled with his passionate belief in the beauty and power of nature. He described nature not as something beautiful, but as an expression of the 'spirit' and the 'music of humanity'. The poem describes one of Wordsworth's early experiences in nature that is a source of both joy and tranquillity, as the lonely girl reaped corn in the Scottish field.


History of the Poem

This poem can be considered as a lyric, supposed to be written in the year 1807. As you go through the solitary reaper explanation you get to understand that the poem was not inspired by an actual sight, but by the description of a solitary reaper which was given in Thomas Wilkinson’s “Tour in Scotland”.
 More info about the poem
  • The journal of a traveller and the diary of his sister remind the poet of such experience and the alacrity that had brought him.
  • So he was inspired to write this wonderful poem.
  • This is one of the finest lyrics that Wordsworth ever produced.

Explanation of The Solitary Reaper

The poem beautifully sets the atmosphere for introducing the readers with a young lonely reaper who dwells in the highlands, reaping the corn and singing a sad song. 'The Solitary Reaper' is a description of a melodious sound that is heard in the atmosphere. Its mood can be described as one of relaxation, depression and gentleness. The poet might have idealized the solitary reaper as a Scottish maidenHe wonders that her song is more appealing and musically perfect then that of a nightingale or a cuckoo. The poet seems to be highly influenced by the soft melancholy, sadness and wistfulness of the song that he hears. The song has left unforgettable impressions and has dwelled into the innermost chords of the poets mind.
It has to be clarified that Wordsworth has projected a democratic note so far as the theme of this poem I concerned. He preferred a simple familiar girl of a peasant as the subject of his poem. This is something uncommon in the history of English poetry because most of the poets of the eighteen century were concerned in portraying “town life and towns people. Wordsworth expressed his democratic view towards mankind by bringing forth this simple Scottish maiden, who happens to be the central character and theme of the poem. In his own words, he “loses incidence from humble and common life a themes for his poems”. The central idea of this poem is that the song sung by a forlorn Scottish girl appears more thrilling and enchanting than that of nightingale or the cuckoo. As the poem progresses, one can feel an eerie, sober melody and soft melancholy that continues and blends with the theme of the poem.
I listened, motionlessly and still:
And as I mounted up the hill
The music in my heart I bore,
Long after it was heard n more. 

Salient Features of the Poem

  • This poem illustrates Wordsworth’s theory of poetry.
  • Wordsworth is able to produce great pieces of poetry when his emotions get recollected in tranquility.
  • He and his sister Dorothy had encountered many search reapers singing while at work in remote parts of the highlands of Scotland during their tour.
  • This poem presents Wordsworth's democratic view towards life
The poem is simple yet romantic, pure yet serene. There is no art in the poem but imaginary and magical musical tone is sufficient enough to make the readers go into depths of Wordsworth poetry.


BIBLIOGRAPHY

She Walks in Beauty - Lord Byron

2013/11/19

She walks in beauty, like the night
   Of cloudless climes and starry skies;
And all that’s best of dark and bright
   Meet in her aspect and her eyes;
Thus mellowed to that tender light
   Which heaven to gaudy day denies.


One shade the more, one ray the less,
   Had half impaired the nameless grace
Which waves in every raven tress,
   Or softly lightens o’er her face;
Where thoughts serenely sweet express,
   How pure, how dear their dwelling-place.


And on that cheek, and o’er that brow,
   So soft, so calm, yet eloquent,
The smiles that win, the tints that glow,
   But tell of days in goodness spent,
A mind at peace with all below,
   A heart whose love is innocent!

MEANING OF DIFFICULT WORDS
1.      Climes- (noun) climate
2.      Mellow- soft, sweet, and full-flavored from ripeness, as fruit. Soft and rich, as sound, tones, color, or light.
3.      Gaudy- cheaply showy in a tasteless way; flashy.
4.      Raven- lustrous black
5.      Eloquent- having or exercising the power of fluent, forceful, andappropriate speech


POETIC/LITERARY DEVICES
1.      Personification
·         Smiles that win- decribes the woman’s soft smiles
·         Heart whose love is innocent – woman’s pure heart
·         Tender light- amplifies the image of softness that the woman possesses

2.      Similes
·         like the night
·         nameless grace / which waves in every raven trees- the poet compares “grace”, the quality of the woman, to an observable phenomenon “raven trees” and makes the portray more clear.

3.      Alliteration
·         cloudless climes
·         starry skies
·         day denies
·         serenely sweet


STANZA BY STANZA ANALYSIS
FIRST STANZA: Describes the physical appearance of the woman. Byron starts the poem with the phrase “She walks in beauty, like the night/ Of cloudless climes and starry skies;.”(1-2) Here, the poet creates an image of a dark, clear sky with twinkling stars, and make a contrast between brightness and darkness. This contrast could mean diverse things, such as “black hair” and “white skin”, or “deep, black eyes” and “clear, white parts of the eyes.” The image created by this contrast represents the cloth the woman is wearing; a black dress with sparkles on it. In the next line, “And all that’s best of dark and bright/ Meet in her aspect and her eyes:,”(3-4) we see how the opposite characteristics of darkness and brightness mentioned in previous lines reappear to mingle and create a wonderful harmony. In the last two lines of this stanza, we see another contrast in imagery. The darkness and brightness from lines above have “mellowed”(5) to become a “tender light,”(5) and this gets contrasted with the expression “gaudy day,”(6) which inheres a negative connotation of excessiveness. Thus, the woman that the poet is praising is in great balance. Opposites “meet” in the woman to create a calm, soft image.

SECOND STANZA: Continues to praise the woman’s appearance, but starting from line 11, the poet extends this external beauty onto the woman’s personality. In the phrase “Had half impaired the nameless grace,”(8) the poet tells us that the woman’s face is in such a perfect portion that just a slight change would damage it. From the expression “half impaired,” we could once again draw out two significant meanings. First, it could mean that although the balance is destroyed, the beauty will still be half marvelous because it is only “half impaired.” Or, if we focus on the notion of “imperfection” when something is in half, the poet might be emphasizing the current, “greatly balanced” status of the woman’s appearance which should not be destroyed. The expression “nameless grace”(8) is also significant. By adding the word “nameless” in front of the word “grace,” the poet enlarged the woman’s beauty and greatness, thereby suggesting it as something so priceless that can’t be defined nor expressed as a name. We could also understand that the woman has a black hair from the expression “Which waves in every raven tress,.”(9) Compared with conventional qualities of “beauty” during the time when Byron wrote this poem, “black hair” which this woman has is extraordinary. This distinctiveness amplifies the woman’s beauty, as she distinguishes herself from others. Lastly, in the last two lines, “Where thoughts serenely sweet express/ How pure, how dear their dwelling-place.,”(11-12) we start to see how the woman’s inner beauty is reflected in her appearance. “Dwelling-place,”(12) which is where the mind and the spirit belong, is also sweet and pure. With this perfect inner quality added to her external beauty, the woman becomes more perfect as she possesses beauty inside out.

LAST STANZA: Talks both about the woman’s inner and outer characteristics. Her cheek and her smiles are beautiful. In the phrases “days in goodness spent,”(16) “mind at peace,”(17) and “heat whose love is innocent,”(18) we understand that the woman’s inner thoughts are also as pure and graceful just as her appearance. As in previous stanzas, he once again shows the theme of this poem, which is the woman’s physical beauty along with her internal beauty.



CRITICAL APPRECIATION
The poem is about an unnamed woman. She’s really quite striking and the speaker compares her to lots of beauty, “but also dark things like ‘nights’ and ‘starry skies’. The second stanza continues to use the contrast between light and dark, day and night to describe her beauty. We also learn that her face is really pure and sweet. The third stanza wraps it all up. She’s not just beautiful; she’s good and also innocent.

The overall tone of She Walks in Beauty is soft and calm, quite different with the image we have about poet, Lord Byron. Perhaps this extreme contrast between the lovely poem and the author who have lived a dissipated lifestyle makes the poem touches us stronger. We could vividly feel how strong Byron’s admiration of the woman was. Use of soft and simple languages rather than heavy, intellectual words is also significant, as it demonstrates the pure, easily noticeable beauty of the woman. The woman portrayed in this poem must have been truly beautiful to catch Byron’s attention at once, and make him write such a vivid poem. 


READING MATERIAL
Themes: 
1. Appearences
We know that appearances are going to be important in "She Walks in Beauty" from line 1 – after all, the fourth word of the poem is "beauty." The entire poem is one long description of a woman's beauty.

2. Principles
We're talking about the unnamed lady's principles here, not the speaker's. We're guessing – partly based on the poem itself, and partly based on Byron's reputation – that, given the opportunity, he'd happily seduce her. But this particular woman would have none of that. We're told repeatedly that she's pure and innocent, and that's part of why she's so gorgeous

3.  Woman and femininity  
The woman's beauty is related to her movement from the beginning – part of what makes her beautiful is her dynamism and life. She's not just a portrait on a wall; she's a living, breathing, "walk[ing]" person. “or softly lightens o’er her face” Byron has said that the woman's whole "aspect" is beautiful, but now he's trying to put his finger on exactly what makes her facial expression so gorgeous.

4. Awe and amazement
Because of the way the unnamed woman in "She Walks in Beauty" is described, the speaker almost seems to be worshipping her. He idolizes her beauty and compares it to things that are so vast and universal that her beauty seems almost supernatural. The opening simile of the poem compares the unnamed woman to vast and intangible things, like "night" and "starry skies." Why can't he just compare her to a flower, or to something that we can wrap our minds around more easily? The woman is "at peace with all below." With everyone on earth? She has no outstanding grudges or disagreements with anyone? This makes her seem almost saintly – no wonder the speaker is in awe of her.

Byron wrote this poem about Mrs. Wilmot, his cousin Robert Wilmot’s wife. It echoes Wordsworth’s earlier “The Solitary Reaper” (1807) in its conceit: the speaker’s awe upon seeing a woman walking in her own aura of beauty. While ostensibly about a specific woman, the poem extends to encompass the unobtainable and ideal. The lady is not beautiful in herself, but she walks in an aura of Beauty (Flesch 1). In contrast to popular conceptions, her beauty is not easily described as brilliant or radiant, but it is also dark “like the night” (line 1) However, “all that’s best of dark and bright” (line 3) meet in her face and eyes, suggesting that while she walks in a dark beauty, she is herself a brighter, more radiant beauty. To further convolute the image, the woman is described as having “raven tress[es]” (black hair) (line 9), connecting her to the darkness, while the “nameless grace” (line 8) “lightens” her face—possibly a play on the word, meaning the grace alights on her face, but also including the brighter aspect of lightening her countenance.

Indeed, the beauty of Wilmot is found largely in its balance of opposites: the darkness she walks in (and her dark hair) counterpoise her fair skin and the bright pureness of her soul. In this lady, the “tender light” is “mellowed,” in contrast to the “gaudy day” which has only the glaring sun and no shade to soften its radiance. Thus the lady’s simple, inner perfection produces a beauty superior to nature itself.

This grace is “nameless” in that it is ineffable. It is a common idea to say that there is no way for human word or verse to encompass it, so it must remain nameless even as the speaker perceives it clearly. Prose cannot come close to a description of this abstract beauty, so the speaker must attempt it in verse.

These issues raise a concern that the woman seems so pure because she is so simple; she wears her thoughts directly on her face, and she shows no evidence of discrimination of better from worse. Her mind is “at peace with all below” (line 17), and she loves innocently. If she is beautiful like the night, perhaps her mind truly is like a sky without any clouds of trouble or confusion. In contrast, she has been able to spend her days in “goodness,” the tints in her face glowing like stars in the sky, small punctuations in a vast emptiness above.

Some critics maintain, however, that the glimpse of Wilmot which inspired this poem was afforded Byron at a funeral; thus the images of darkness which surround the lady can be drawn from the mourning clothes she and those around her wear. This beauty is “like the night” because this time of spiritual darkness—mourning the passing of a loved one—does not detract from her beauty, but instead accentuates it.

In any case, in this woman dark and light are reconciled. This reconciliation is made possible by the main sources of the lady’s beauty: her mind “at peace with all below” and her “heart whose love is innocent” (line 18). By possessing a genial mind and innocent heart, the lady can bring the beauty of both darkness and light out and together without contradiction; her purity softens the edges of the contrasts.


Byron eschews erotic or physical desire in this poem, preferring instead to express the lady’s beauty without professing his own emotions. He restricts his physical descriptions of her to her eyes, brow, hair, and smiles. Her loveliness has to do with her innocence and her “days in goodness spent” (line 16), whether it results from her virtue or simply from the poet’s imagination of that virtue. After all, if we bracket the likely autobiographical element of the poem, we do not know whether the speaker has caught anything more than a few moments’ glimpse of a beautiful woman walking by.


BIBLIOGRAPHY

Literature Essay Marking Scheme

2013/11/09

Many of you candidates do not understand how the marking system goes, so here it is

Q: What am I sitting for in this exam?
A:
 Throughout the year you have three papers:
     First term, 920/1 = Poetry and Short Stories
     Second term, 920/2 = Plays
     Third term, 920/3 = Novels

Q: How will my marks be counted?
A: Each paper have three sections, three essays to write and each essay is 25 marks. The whole paper weighs 75 marks, in percentage is 33.33%. At the end of your term, the marks for all three papers you took will be added (33.33% + 33.33% + 33.33% = 100%) and you will get your finalized grade.

Q: How do I score 25 marks for all three sections?
A: Content will be 10 marks, elaboration is 10 marks and language is 5 marks. To be on a safe side, write SIX paragraphs for each section.
Introduction
{ State the question: Etc, question is on social and cultural barriers
-write author's background relation to it
- state the poem/short story/play/novel you chose to write on
-how the question affects the characters in those period }
Note: your first content point will be given on how you start 
your essay and how well you relate to the question

Content #1
{ Question posed: With close reference to any two poems, 
discuss how love is expressed through images of nature.
- write on the FIRST poem in this paragraph }
Note: your second content point and elaboration

Content #2
-write on the SECOND poem
Note: your third content point and elaboration

Content #3
-write on the FIRST poem
Note: your fourth content point and elaboration

Content #4
-write on the SECOND poem
Note: your fifth content point and elaboration

Conclusion
{ Conclude your essay and emphasize on how
 it affects/relate to our current society }
Notice: Content 1 - 2 marks           Elaboration 1-  2 marks            Language: Spelling
                         2-  2 marks                                2-  2 marks                       and Grammar
                         3-  2 marks                                3-  2 marks
                         4-  2 marks                                4-  2 marks
                         5-  2 marks                                5-  2 marks                                          
                             10 marks                                   10  marks                             5 marks 


Q: Is the marking system different for each section?
A:
No, it is just the same. Each section shares equivalent marks so there are no difference.

Q: What will they look for in my critical appreciation skills?
A: 
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1. Language and form : Literary devices, narrative techniques, setting, characterisation, structure, themes/issues/concerns, readers response, language and style
2. History and culture : Context, themes/issues and cultural perspective
3. Gender : Gender, context ( historical/socio-cultural), themes/issues, perspective (reading as a woman or man) and cultural perspective

Q: How would I know what to pay attention to for poetry/short stories/plays/novels?
A: {Disclamer: content shown can be found from MPM website }
Poetry                                                                   Short Stories
-background                                                        - background
-verse forms                                                        - plot [development of plot]
-devices [figure of speech/diction]                        - characterisation
-metrics [rhythm]                                                 - setting [place/time/atmosphere]
-theme and interpretation                                     - narrative techniques
-atmosphere [mood/feeling]                                 - literary devices
-relevance [relevance to the present]                    - language and style
-moral concerns                                                   - themes
                                                                            - relevance [relevance to the present] 
                                                                            - moral concerns   

Plays                                                                    Novels
- background [writer/period/stage]                        - background [writer/period]
- types of play [comedy/tragedy/etc]                      - plot [development of plot]
- reading the text [language and style/devices]        - characterisation
- aspects of play [plot/structure/characters]            - setting [place/time/atmosphere]
-relevance [relevance to the present]                      - narrative techniques
-moral concerns                                                    - literary devices
                                                                             - language and style
                                                                             - themes
                                                                             - relevance [relevance to the present] 
                                                                             - moral concerns        



Q: How will my essays be graded?
A: {Disclamer: content shown can be found from MPM website }
 Grade A 
 Candidate shows a detailed knowledge and excellent understanding of text
 Candidate addresses all aspects of the question with sustained relevance to issues
 Candidate exhibits ability to identify, analyse, and evaluate tone, attitude, character, form, 
structure, and language
 Candidate demonstrates a critical, sensitive, and original response to text. 
 Candidate shows an informed response to text. 
 Candidate writes fluently and expresses complex ideas clearly
 Candidate displays logical and coherent development of argument
 Candidate supports argument with appropriate textual evidence
  
Grade C  (I don't think I need to bold the requirements to get a grade C, AIM FOR AN A)
Candidate shows sufficient understanding and knowledge of text. 
Candidate addresses some aspects of the question. 
Candidate exhibits some ability to identify and discuss tone, attitude, character, form, structure, 
and language. 
Candidate demonstrates a basic personal response to text. 
Candidate‘s answer contains a fair number of language errors. 
Candidate shows some organisation and development of ideas. 
Candidate supports argument with sufficient textual evidence. 
Candidate uses some narration. 

I wish all candidates best of luck for all your papers!

For more information visit MPM website on 920 paper:
 http://www.mpm.edu.my/documents/10156/28d2cd05-be4c-48a2-b967-bd0a14f4d24e

Discuss the social and cultural aspects related to only of two short stories that you have read

2013/10/11

            The chosen short stories are “Ratnamuni” and “The Dream of Vasantha”, both written by the literary artist, K.S. Maniam. Maniam has explored and revealed a range of Malaysian landscapes for the people who live there. Landscape can be defined as the “living process” of the authentic Malaysian mosaic. From the aspects of landscape, social is described as the relations of human beings in a community whilst the culture of a community is an additional aspect to be examined. By means of culture, it is the behaviors and beliefs characteristic of a particular social or ethnic. Like Maniam, whose birthplace was Bedong in Kedah, both stories take place there and in terms of social and culture, the stories are heavily linked to each other.

            “Ratnamuni” highlights the plight of Indian immigrants in an unknown land. The line ‘the people going from one darkness to another darkness’ pointed out that the future of Indians during that period are bleaking. Indians are treated only as mere slaves and shall be in the low class social status. Education seems to be the way out from the oppression of low class society. Maniam himself affirms that the English education has given him a center to life. The character, Muthiah, had proven so after hours of having his nose in a book, he is placed in a comfortable spot in the society by being a clerk. But for the illiterate people like Muniandy, he had to perform odd jobs such as boat rower, a medium and cart pusher. During that era, Indians are placed to live in the rubber estates, separated from other races as well. It is a part of the reason why Indians are looked down because they are not given the opportunity to improve themselves in other areas of life.

            There is a change from the story “Ratnamuni” in “The Dream of Vasantha”. Vasantha is a single mother who wants nothing else but to achieve her dream, which is bringing up her child as an honorable person. Vasantha will go through the hardship she faced without fail just to earn some money for her son’s education. Vasantha clearly sees education as the light to escape from the grasp of society that classify Indians as the low class community. Vasantha also has to work numerous job to gain more income such as dhobi and ironing clothes service. In this story, the community in the village is also the same as the community in the story “Ratnamuni”. The people obviously like look out for other family’s affair and it had become an unhealthy norm. The news of Ganesh travel quickly among the villagers while Ratnam’s misdoings are known by everyone in the village.

            The Indian immigrants in “Ratnamuni” also face conflicts as they undergo the attempt to transplant an uprooted culture in the new land. As Muniandy says, “When my wife bent over me in the mornings.. I was too happy to see the customs from the Big Country still used in my house”. The challenge Muniandy faces, the culture shock and the difficulty to fit in are his endeavor to retain his culture in Malaya. Women are also the subjects of their husbands, as they are very submissive to their men. It is substantial for them to show obeisance by knocking their hand on their husbands’ feet in the morning, an act to show their loyalty and obedience. Malini actually took her own life because she could not bear the shame of being raped and giving birth to a “bastard”, the child of her rapist, as she feels unworthy of her husband.

            Vasantha is also quite particular to the Indian culture even though she is a widow. She told herself that she would remain true to her dead husband. The relationship between men and women are mentioned in both stories to show the importance of women being submissive to their men during that period. Vasantha vowed that she will never be with another man as she is tied to one man in her lifetime, dead or alive. In the Indian culture as well, the boys in the family seem to be more pampered and loved. Ganesh is so well treated by his mother until he starts to climb the ladder to suppress his mother. “Ratnamuni” reflects the same predicament as Ratnam became ungrateful and selfish to Muniandy after being cared and brought up by his only father. Ratnam only goes to his father for money.

            Maniam had gone to depth to tell about his experience in Bedong from his early years. These social and cultural aspects that he experienced during the pre-independence era, the plight of Indians are written clearly in both of the stories. It is understandable that their lifestyle is different from ours because of the different practices and cultures from the locals here. The inferiority among the community is caused by the division of race, that made them being looked down. Maniam stresses on these topics to make us realize the importance of peace among races and also maintaining our traditions and customs for future generations. In conclusion, these aspects help us to understand more about our country’s history and the Indian culture.

6/9/2012

MALAYSIAN SHORT STORY A Love of The Past - Stella Kon

2013/09/15

This story is quite modern and it circles around the life of a mistress which contains sexism and superstitious community. I doubt that there will be any questions proposed to this short story, neither in this coming exam nor ever. Women are portrayed sexually, the mannerism which shows our [woman] greed over materialism and using our body to get what we want. Stella Kon's work speaks of the truth in our present time and very unlikely the government will use this text in the exam. 

Theme: Dwelling in the past is destructive

1. Loneliness
Melinda is lonely too because her 'protector', Mr Wong only comes once or twice a week. Jade Swallow is also lonely because she was murdered and her soul is stuck at the place for a century. When people knew that Jade was still staying there, they moved to another place. Jade is glad that Melinda is staying there now.

2. Melinda begs Jade to help Jeffrey
Knowing that Jade is from the past, she asked for her help to tell her lover, Jeffrey about old Singapore.

3. Greed
Melinda is so desperate to help Jeffrey to finish his thesis so that he can graduate that she asked for a ghost's help. Melinda's greed eventually lead to her own destruction because she didn't consider the fact that Jade is a vengeful spirit and it is better to stay away from her.